Save the Diva Kelly KellySave the Diva created story

Hi everyone, I'm posting here to get some feedback on a story I created named  

Save the Diva Kelly on PS3

Which is a short story of how a Caw superstar (which I created) named Nice Guy saves Kelly Kelly from being taken by Godfather after he's buys her contract.

Now I understand the whole Diva in distress thing is only popular with a few members but I hope to get some feedback anyway. The feedback really can be on anything to do with the story be it, it was too short, the story's a little to farfetched or even the characters were not how they would behave. I would like to hear your thoughts.

If you would like to download this story, do pay a visit to the community creations area through your WWE 13 game online mode, click on download and in the search box type 'Save the Diva Kelly' and you should find it with ease.

The Tags I used on this story was Diva, Kelly, save.

Thank for reading and I hope to hear back from you all soon.

Edited by smackdown18, 08 August 2013 - 07:50 PM.

I will try it...

I will try it...

Don't worry CM Pier, there nothing sexual or anything in it. Its just a plan boring rescuing idea and nothing more, but I do appreciate the look even if you not keen.  

New Save the Diva story is up on Community Creations (PS3). This one is called,

Save the Diva B-Twins (Yes... Don't think about the name too much)

This again is a short story where Nice Guy tries to get the Bella twins back from Godfather, who this time has got some back-up. But unlike the last story there is more then one hero in this story.

Warning! This story does not require Fan AXXES anymore. (Yay) Fixed on 08/08/2013 

If you would like to download this story, do pay a visit to the community creations area through your WWE 13 game online mode, click on download and in search box, search for stories, most recent and here are the tags I used on this story. Diva, Bella, Twins, Save.

Have fun.

All content is PG rating as required by terms of conditions.

Edited by smackdown18, 08 August 2013 - 09:05 PM.

I saw this thread before but you never said which console. I assume PS3? If so I can't play but it sounds like you may want to make them a little more original(just going off what you say here). Just a tip

I saw this thread before but you never said which console. I assume PS3? If so I can't play but it sounds like you may want to make them a little more original(just going off what you say here). Just a tip

Yeah tell me about it. I will have to be a little more careful with this creating story stuff. Thanks for the tip man.

Update:

Found my problem, I had put content in there without thinking.  

Edited by smackdown18, 10 August 2013 - 12:50 PM.

New Save the Diva story is up on Community Creations (PS3). This one is called,

Save the Divas Be/Eve

This is a short story where Nice Guy finds himself in trouble with the new raw manager after agreeing to manage one of the divas. He finds himself in matches against old foes as well as the new manager, all in the name of saving the divas.   

If you would like to download this story, do pay a visit to the community creations area through your PS3 WWE 13 game online mode, click on download and in the search box, search for stories, most recent and here are the tags I used on this story. Diva, Beth, Eve, Save.

Have fun.

All content is PG rating as required by terms of conditions.

I never use story mode. I find it to be too much work and extremely tedious and boring.

I never use story mode. I find it to be too much work and extremely tedious and boring.

Fair enough.

New Save the Diva is out on the PS3.

This time as chosen by folks here on the smackdown hotel. This short story will focus on Natalya as she tries to get the diva championship only to run into trouble with her man the great Khali, the old diva champion Kharma as well as the Raw manager JBL. Still even with all this, our heroine will get help from not one but two superstars this time, one being Nice Guy while the other is that famous Irish superstar. 

Can they save her? Or will Natalya chance to be champion be swept away?

Warning! This story does require Fan AXXES since Natalya is downloadable content.

If you would like to download this story, do pay a visit to the community creations area through your PS3 WWE 13 game online mode, click on download and in the search box, search for stories, most recent and here are the tags I used on this story. Diva, Natalya, Save, The

Have fun.

All content is PG rating as required by terms of conditions.

Tried it yesterday afternoon; rated it in Community Creations.

Well done. I liked that it was short and simple (I also like the DIVA in question but that's personal preference). Wish that "NiceGuy" would have used Entrance Music saved to the console to avoid the "MUSIC ERROR: TRACK NOT AVAILABLE" but again, that's just me. I liked that by keeping the story short, it didn't freeze my console halfway through the story and force me to reset as most of the longer stories do. (Sorry; I could have gone into all of this detail over COMMUNITY CREATIONS except for the 80 CHARACTER limit).

Overall, I stand behind the rating I gave you (4 STARS, I think it was) and thought that it was well-done and creative.

Tried it yesterday afternoon; rated it in Community Creations.

 

Well done. I liked that it was short and simple (I also like the DIVA in question but that's personal preference). Wish that "NiceGuy" would have used Entrance Music saved to the console to avoid the "MUSIC ERROR: TRACK NOT AVAILABLE" but again, that's just me. I liked that by keeping the story short, it didn't freeze my console halfway through the story and force me to reset as most of the longer stories do. (Sorry; I could have gone into all of this detail over COMMUNITY CREATIONS except for the 80 CHARACTER limit).

 

Overall, I stand behind the rating I gave you (4 STARS, I think it was) and thought that it was well-done and creative.

 

 

 

Tried it yesterday afternoon; rated it in Community Creations.

 

Well done. I liked that it was short and simple (I also like the DIVA in question but that's personal preference). Wish that "NiceGuy" would have used Entrance Music saved to the console to avoid the "MUSIC ERROR: TRACK NOT AVAILABLE" but again, that's just me. I liked that by keeping the story short, it didn't freeze my console halfway through the story and force me to reset as most of the longer stories do. (Sorry; I could have gone into all of this detail over COMMUNITY CREATIONS except for the 80 CHARACTER limit).

 

Overall, I stand behind the rating I gave you (4 STARS, I think it was) and thought that it was well-done and creative.

 

Thank you very much for the review here as well as the creations. I apologies for not getting back to you sooner but you see I have been ill and still recovering. Yes the music is my fault you see during the creation process I created Nice Guy with theme music from a song from Will Smith called Nice guy. Still I will try to remove this in later creations. Still thank you again for the review and for taking the time to write one here as well and I'm glad to hear it didn't freeze on you.