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January week 1 The Miz Comes out And starts requesting a match against Undertaker at wrestlemania The lights go off and suddenly the Undertaker appears The miz trys to fight him and then goes for a ton rope move but the undertaker stops him and does a chokeslam off the top rope through the announce table

 

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You made a mistake its Storyline but its an OK story it needs a lot of work with a back-story and everything



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Yeah Im trying to build up to make it bigger as the weeks go on



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You made a mistake its Storyline but its an OK story it needs a lot of work with a back-story and everything



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-Is Miz playing a face or a heel? 

-Is this a respect feud, or is Miz being a cocky bastard?

-If Miz is playing the good guy and you're doing a respect feud, shouldn't the two not make physical contact with each other? The way you've put this out, it sounds like 'Taker is playing the heel. 

-If Miz is the heel, you've already reached your climax. There's really nothing more to build up to besides a match. It would've made more sense to have Miz escape a Chokeslam in the ring, then run off. Now you are not only building up to another meeting, but another Chokeslam. 



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January week 2 Shawn Michaels Is the guest host of raw 

 

Wade Barrett comes out and declares that he also wants to face Undertaker At wrestlemania 

The Miz interrupts  And trash talks Wade Barrett saying that That there is no chance he could beat undertaker

Shawn Michaels interrupts Both of them calling the whiny bitches and  makes a match between the two at royal rumble to shut them up and the winner will face taker at wrestlemania and also announces A tag match later that night with the miz and wade barrett teaming together against the brothers of destruction

 

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January week 2 The tag match starts but wade and miz Are having disputes over Who is starting but the Undertaker comes over and double clotheslines them and wade wll be starting the match Wade gets a few punches into taker the miz then tags himself in And wade barrett isnt too happy about And the two start arguing Then Undertaker taeks advantage of him

He then tags in kane Who gets Miz up and chokeslams him He goes for the cover but wade stops it kane Turned his attention to wade but he s saved by miz but then Undertaker gets tagged in and Tomstones Miz while kane Chokeslams wade Undertaker goes for the cover and wins

 

After the Match when Wade and miz Finally Get up shawn Michaels and hhh Both come in and do their finishing moves on them and then going on to do their suc it taunt



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I definitely admire all the storyline creators out there...but I feel that you're missing out on much, that would have set these confrontations up. You already had Miz getting destroyed, and then, Miz and Barrett getting beat. There is no option left that would have fans thinking that Miz or Barrett would actually pose a threat to 'Taker.

Maybe I'm just catching the end of the story arc, but it seems like a match between Miz/Taker is already anticlimactic. Are you just writing this, or are you creating this, as a playable story???  IMO, storylines take much build up, to lead to your "big moments"... It's difficult to just have a guy come out, and make a challenge, without some sort of set up, or back story. Miz and Barret could have had some moments where they come out looking like actual threats to Undertaker.

 

The way it reads, you might be spinning yourself into a Miz/Barret match..

 

Keep creating !!



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January week 3 The Miz and Barrett Come out and claim that they werent ready for a match last week but they are now and are hoping For a rematch against the brothers of destruction They get the match And actually get a win After the match Undertaker and Kane go for chokeslams on both of them But Wade and Miz reverse it It and turn it into both of their finishers On them and then Heyman came out and said whoever Wins at royal rumble he will manage them both men agree and shae hands with him 






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